Kriliah's conflict - story five

With everything going on in their head, Kriliah finds it's not so easy to remember and utilise the skills they discovered at the Vortexes.

Oct 17, 2023

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I’m yelling crazily.

“Stop. Just. Stop. I really wish I was back at Tenich Outpost, bored out of my mind. At least I knew what I was doing there.” My breathing is ragged. “You two are NOT helping. I’m more confused than when we started. Jalisse, you're drunk most of the time, and you,” I point to Crox, “just keep pushing, pushing, pushing.”

I see Crox and Jalisse exchange a worried glance. Crox coaxes, “Distraction makes this harder. What’s distracting you, K?”

I abruptly turn away from them both, pacing the bouncing, tussocky ground of Bubbly Green. I am distracted and torn. I cannot tell the others that I feel like the biggest fraud to be leading this expedition to find the key. I do wish I was back at Tenich. I’m also regretting bringing Crox into my life. And, it turns out that I am so damned useless at remembering and harnessing these mental skills.

Plus, Frubble Frontier makes me feel a hundred times worse. It’s the “perfect” place for me to remember the skills - the whole vibe here is about mental constructs and thought bubbles. The Trekkers and Jalisse are having no trouble tapping into these bubbly energies - turning the ever present bubbles into tangible needs or desires. The Trekkers are permanently snoozing on cosy bubble beds they've thought into being. ‘Isse is on a semi-permanent bender over at Bubble Bends and is only occasionally sober. She's discovered she can think hooch into existence here.

Why, why, why? Every time I try to harness a mental construct, my concentration drifts into space like one of the bubbles here. I used my skills at the Vortexes without too much effort. As I think this, a widget we collected from Hexton pulses insistently against my leg. I’m beginning to trust these nudges from the widgets. This time it's the tiny white gilded cage that is “speaking to me”, and I know what I need to say to Crox.

“Let’s change tack here. I feel like you’re caging me in, expecting so much, in such a short time. Rather than trying to show me my skills, why don’t you just tell me what they are! If I stop trying so freaking hard, I know it will come to me.”

“But you need to learn to tap into them intentionally, K.”

“Yeah” I mutter. “But if I cannot even access them in the first place, how will I ever do that? Let me at least try to get a feel for their power first, in my own way. Let me out of the damned cage, for the love of Thandi!”

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