Love this ... great finish, Debs. In the spirit of 'great minds think alike', this is what I came up with the end it - I couldn't resist ... just love fiddling with words!
Heart pounding, eyes widening. How could they have tracked her? Cameras everywhere, of course. Who had they asked? She’d been a fool to trust anyone. Sighing deeply, pushing past the inertia, past the terror pinning herself to the chair. Feet like lead, hands shaking.
“Delivery for No 32”.
Her voice quavers. “Next door”.
Thank you so much for instigating the collaboration. Great for both of us to be nudged along the creative path. B
You are so right! I miscounted ... I will edit before I share it. The collaboration is the 100-word story Debs shared, my 50 + her 50. My (53) words above was me fiddling about with my own starter and making my own ending. Yeah, I confused things ... having one of those days!! B
Love this ... great finish, Debs. In the spirit of 'great minds think alike', this is what I came up with the end it - I couldn't resist ... just love fiddling with words!
Heart pounding, eyes widening. How could they have tracked her? Cameras everywhere, of course. Who had they asked? She’d been a fool to trust anyone. Sighing deeply, pushing past the inertia, past the terror pinning herself to the chair. Feet like lead, hands shaking.
“Delivery for No 32”.
Her voice quavers. “Next door”.
Thank you so much for instigating the collaboration. Great for both of us to be nudged along the creative path. B
Wait, so did you write 50 of the 100 in her story or are you adding 50 now and it's a 150 word story? (also, you've got 53 words not 50 there 😉)
You are so right! I miscounted ... I will edit before I share it. The collaboration is the 100-word story Debs shared, my 50 + her 50. My (53) words above was me fiddling about with my own starter and making my own ending. Yeah, I confused things ... having one of those days!! B
It happens 😊
Thank you!
Oh yes, we were both thinking in the same direction! I like it.
Here's to our next collab!